shadow6nothing9's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Funeral (Piano)]

Dark and Sad Indeed

The beginning sounded sad, then it moved to a angerier tone... Wth? I just noticed something.... Tone, Note? There the same thing? Anyways. All that sadness and anger is drivin to an inevitable suicide.

If anything its a really great goodbye sounding piece.

Two Thumbs up!

[Kaiz- Oxidus Fire]

Oxidus Water

Theres another title for a calmer track :P
You built it up very nicely. I just wish there was a little more punch at 0:33 If you know what I mean. I think your very close to something and it needs a few more tweaks and polishing here and there,

Worth a download/Gonna check out your other stuff

nightsurfermusic responds:

Thanks for the review! I do need a little more variation, maybe an extra synth the stands out a bit more. Thanks for the feedback and i'll be sure to change some things around :D

[This Was Made By My Sister]

Pretty Cool

Would like to hear just the violins then the kicks as an intro. Its a too short/anddoesn't loop good and the other instruments sounds kinda generic. I would like to hear some harmony strings with the violins (Which is the only thing that caught my ear.) Did she play the violin, what did you use for it?

OvalsinOuterSpace responds:

Its not suposed to loop
And i made the song on garageband so no playo violino
thanks for the sugesstions i might use them inn another song!

[carly commando everyday]

Cool

I really like this track and it sounds really nice. But...

What exactly did you change around? Sounds exactly the same as the one on youtube. I'm giving you a good score cause I like this song but it isn't fair for the other audio submitters who put 'actual' work into there music rather then submitting someone elses. If you added/changed it around and played with your hands I'd give you a higher score other then that.

4/5:7/10

rosenrotR responds:

shadow6nothing9 hello,

happy new year,

I assure you that the sound is changed, both listen at the same time and tell me what you think by Message

As I said, these are not wholesale changes because I filed this track newgrounds to remember who made the music, so it's not unfair to the authors!

thank you for good grades,

hoping explain better next time

[New Years Party]

NewYears is over,

So get over it. :P

I look for three things when I listen to a song, its catchiness and the emotions it brings out to the listener... =| Especially in the first minute, it never came until much later.

It sounded very generic, but other than that it was very nicely mixed. All you need is a catchy chorus and a good singer.

I suggest getting ready for the next new year, you have 12 months to prepare. Keep making more and you'll be getting better

syphonmax responds:

lol I will, and I'm pretty sure I did get over the new year XD

And thanks ^_^

[Don't Cry (Beta 1.1)]

Hmm

If this is a dance song then work the kick beat early or fade it in early to dance to. The mastering was alright. When you test it. Try it on full volume-then mid, then the same with speakers. So you can tell if its too loud or quiet.

Other then that, it just, doesn't feel really catchy yet. Give it more time to grow and play around with it and it will sound better.

Skyflyer responds:

I make it better, it's an Beta!

[\Nice Guys Finish Last/]

Awesome

I like the piano the most in this, the instrument at 05 gives it a funky sound to it and I don't think it really fits with the sad/dark mood, maybe in that happier part. The drums sounds like they were just slapped on and they don't really add to the song, I would like to hear some string accompaniment instead. Great track 4/5

Adamaja456 responds:

thanks for the feedback! I'll be sure to look into changing different aspects of piano pieces i make in the future.

[Ambient tryout]

Hmm

Reminded me of some 80s horror flick, or... an exorcist track.
You should always be careful when using those kind of bells. it can hurt the ears. Maybe use the bells on a lower octave and not as much. Or replace it with a piano.
Play around with the strings more and use different sounds. Mix it around a but, I found it a little repetitive, especially in the first minute. This can sound much better if you take your time and most of all have fun with it.

combatplayer responds:

i know. i know. i know...! but as i say in my text its far from finished and my computer simply cant handel it... if i try to changing it my computer almost freses up... i cant do anything more as it is.. i only made the different parts that was the only thing i was capabel of hearing the setup and a little of the effectes was made as i think it shuld be cus u couldent hear it..

btw its ment to be a little horror movie like cus im stil trying to do as many different kinds of music as i can overcome. so ofcurse some will be good and others will be partly failuers..

but i like the melodi in this track and i wanted to play around with the repedetive part and i liked the result therfor did i upload it cus maby others could see that to... i had to uplode it as a unfinished project cus of the reason i mentioned up there...

and i like the bell synth.. ill maybe lower the volume a bit and make the sound a little less sharp so its not damaging anyone BUT i wont make it a piano.. up till now i almost use a piano in all my tracks and this was also a try to not doing that.
and the bell matches the rest pretty well (if u ask me that is)..

and i only make music for the fun so u dont have to worrie abaut that XD

sorry for the insane long response i ended up doing o_O
and thanks for the review.. i like reviews eaven if its bad scores aslong they have a desent reason to give the low amaunt of points.. and u do...
thanks again...

[Redroze]

Cool

Sounds like something out of an old snes game.... one of those mario ones, can't put my finger on it.

[Night Battle]

Good

This wasnt too too bad, I liked the percussion in this and I just wish there was a more strong brass presence section in there.