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My personal beliefs

I say it's about the creativity and imagination you put into your music. Most Techno and electronic music uses no live played instruments but it's still there and yet it can still strike emotions.

I love minor scales and I enjoyed it. You picked out every single note and writing isn't easy. Good job with this.

Pure-Metal-UTA responds:

I like minor scales alot too, I feel that it can bring about more emotion, either happy or sad than a major scale can... when I'm writing that is.
But like Kor-Rune said, it is pretty much a sandbox of ideas. It could have progressed better, and lead into alot more epicness.
That isn't to say that I'm not glad you enjoyed it, I really am. But there is alot of space for improvement on this song.
Thanks for the review!

Remember

It's about the joy and creativity of making music :) keep making music

Cool

Sweet lyrics and rhymes. Don't know why it got a low score. It's cause its not crazy techno stuff :P I wanna try putting this over an instrumental hiphop beat just to see how it will sound.

Could use some cowbell.

Seriously I needs more cowbell. xD

It's good but the violin sounds sorta synthetic in a way. But still its great/

Not enough cowbell.

I got a fever, and the only prescription is.... More CowBell!

Nynety-Nyne responds:

I apologise for my lack of cowbell, this sort of thing doesn't usually happen with me, I think you should go home and we never speak of this incident again.
Good day!

Sounds Annoying

That piano melody is very repetitive and sounds straight off the bat random. It just sounds like it can be made by some one else in five minutes. But that doesn't mean you shouldn't stop now. Keep trying and you'll get better.

Any ways it does have a lil darker tone which I like. The only thing I can suggest is look for some good synths.

dondrummer responds:

the first melody i made myself and then added to it so its not comltely random.

Is that, Christopher Walkin?

Anyways. Some of the synths sound weird and don't really fit. Like in 1:40 and afterwards, but thats preference. Hmmm did u mean percussive orchestral?

Do u play te guitars? It sent me into a state of trying to figure what im hearing, in a good way.

Awesome.

Centrist responds:

Haha, first off, thanks for the review. :]

SECONDLY; I tried to get the synths to sound somewhat like what strings would be like in an ensemble, but yeah, I added in the orchestral drums to keep the even flow.

And yeah, I recorded everything that wasn't drum or synth in this track, which pretty much leaves the guitar. :]

Cool

Piano's too muddy?... Eh, too much reverb. You should try to bring it out more. Then again i dont know much about ambient.

About the vocals... Just feels like your holding back a little bit. Idk, can't put my finger on it. Maybe sing it 2 keys done, or up.

Kinda like the last part a bit, interesting.

Good Good.

The Phone Rings

It's your mother, and she has just ran over your cat with her semi-van. You cry out.

"Muffin!" As loud as you can into the wind, then silence and grey clouds gather over you.

You bury your cat in the backyard and you shed a tear on it's tomb stone.

"I will always remember you Muffin." Is whispered and you place a rose on her grave.

-End Scene-

Very good, can't help but wonder if some piano is added in it.

BlazingDragon responds:

What a sad scene! It fits wonderfully. Thank you for reviewing.

Awesome

Simple effective backing music, loops well, but I wonder how it would sound with some bass instruments add in with it.

I agree with TJ Could use some work on the percussion.

SeriousAdam responds:

Thanks for the feedback , im going to be messing with it some time this weekend and uploading a new version at some point
:P

Thanks

Adam

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Just wanted to say hi.
I miss you.

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