Sounds very good and dynamic. Just wish it was a minute or two longer and played softer on some parts. I think the whirring string instrument doesn't really fit with the rest of the song at 1:20 but I think the piano playing after that should recur through out the song.
This suffers from the musician's quality of needing better vsti instrument's but that should never get in the way of getting in the way of a musician because it's ideas that motivate you. At it's core a pop song is supplied by a singer's personal melody , but as a classical stand point it needs more variation to keep the listener interested.
Personally I would use some slight reverb on the instrument's and make it loop properly, or make at least a proper ending for it.
What I love is the mood it create's. :-) A sense of enjoyment.
Thanks for the review! yeah, I think you are right, I really should get some better VSTI instruments. And I'm not sure what you mean by make it loop properly, if you mean the entire song looping, then I'm not intending for the song to loop at all. If it's not that, I really don't know what you mean, I will probably send you a message and ask DX But I'm glad you liked the mood it created, unfortunately I can't think of an atmosphere in a video game or a film that this could fit in. But the music I have made makes me happy and i think for making a song out of pure enjoyment, that is just fine.
I appreciate the review though!
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One thing I'd say is, it sounds like the audio is clipping in some parts of the track. Other than that. The whole thing is both hypnotic and mesmerizing. The way you play with the melodies is awesome, and it's a much better edit then the first one.
thank you! :D donoo bout the clipping thing. maybe it's your sound? ;)
Like reticulatas said. It needs some kind of boost in the audio, I don't know, maybe the equalizing, or maybe reducing the verb more. Just sounds slightly muddy to me. The bass notes are fine, but I'd like to hear the melodies being played slightly louder. Enough for it to shine through.
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I wish I could slap thousands of dollars worth of orchestrals samples on your uploads. It would all sound entirely different. Checking out your other submissions.
Just needs a proper playing, or a really good vst.
Sounds like Rufus Shinras theme a little, mixed with that "James Bond" chord progression in the beginning. O.o
I actually like it and think Its really good. Its just the mastering is really bad, I mean it sucks.
Nice simple relaxed feel
Definitely not overdone and definitely not amateurish. A real good track. Probably second best I've heard all day. There is absolutely nothing here that I see could really use improvement :)
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